Guest Blog: "Comma Wars" by Wayne Scheer
It's a problem every writer faces each day. No, not how
am I going to express my thoughts elegantly and concisely or even how am I going
to earn enough money to make it through next month?
Rather, where should I place the damned comma?
There are rules, of course. But in order to understand the rules, you
must have a command of such phrases as, "coordinate adjectives," "restrictive
elements," "parenthetical expressions," as well as the ever-popular,
"independent and dependent clauses."
Trying to understand the logic behind comma rules is like trying to
balance Jello on the tip of a banana. Even if you succeed, you still ask
yourself: "Why did I bother?"
So we can all appreciate the kommakrigen, comma war,
taking place in Denmark. That's right. The Cold War may be dead, but the dreaded
commas continue to creep and crawl over the writings of Danes, great and
otherwise, dancing doggedly from phrase to phrase.
You see, up until the Second World War, Danish was
dependent on rules of German punctuation. That meant commas were used aggressively in
rigid, lockstep formation. The problem is after the war, everything German
became so uncool that Danish schools stopped teaching the rules, and most folk,
if they once accepted the German punctuation mentality, soon denied any
knowledge of it.
But the comma remained, and few knew when to use
it.
However, the present-day Conservatives want to bring back
the old German way of punctuating by stressing the basics of grammar in the
Danish school system while the left-wing Social Democrats, under the authority
of the 1996 Language Committee of the Ministry of Culture, are rallying behind the "New Comma," with its
de-emphasis on rules. Instead, it argues that the comma should be used primarily
to denote natural pauses of breath in Danish speech.
Sound familiar?
The problem, of course, is few Danes understand the old
German rules well enough to use the comma with any kind of consistency and just
as few Danes speak in regular breath patterns, especially when dealing with
matters of punctuation and politics. The left-wing accuses the Conservatives of
fostering an elitism based on a foreign ideology and the right-wing accuses the
Social Democrats of a kind of dummying down to appease the masses. For the
grammarians, nothing less than the future of Danish civilization is at stake.
Is there a lesson in this for us? Perhaps. But for me I'd rather let the Danes
fight it out while I try to determine if I need a comma or if I can get away
without using one even if this final sentence leaves me
breathless.
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Wayne Scheer has locked himself in a
room with his computer and turtle since his retirement. (Wayne's, not the
turtle's.) To keep from going back to
work, he's published hundreds of short
stories, essays and poems, including Revealing Moments, a collection of flash
stories. He's been nominated for four Pushcart Prizes
and a Best of the Net. Wayne lives in
Atlanta with his wife and can be contacted at wvscheer@aol.com.
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The book Eats, Shoots, and Leaves by Lynne Truss has nothing to do with Wayne's guest blog. I just thought it was a nice addition for those comma-challenged people as a resource.
1 comment:
Oh dear. I don't know any of those clever rules I should understand before placing my comma. Do I still count as a writer? A great man once said, "Writers write." He didn't mention commas.
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